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Wednesday, 27 August 2014

This is my first presuasive writing me and my group done.

I’m Bringing Bikes Back


I believe that we should be able to bring our motorbikes to school. We can’t at the moment.We could do it on our cross country course. I think we should be allowed to bring our motorbikes to school.


One reason why we should be allowed to bring our bikes because riding motobikes is fun. Why do we have to do some, old dumb boring rugby and soccer why don’t we ride our motorbikes to school and ride them in the paddock.The winds flicks my hair back like  grass flicks out of the back of the mower. Why don’t we do some drifts in the paddock?


Another reason why we should be able to bring our motorbike is because it will be safe. We will be away from the babies in room 2. You know how the teachers will say no that’s so dangerous. We will be safe. For example,but we will be wearing helmets and protective gear etc. But the only people that can ride the motorbikes can handle the motorbikes. Added to this people eight years and up and People who have experience on the motorbikes will be able to ride the motorbikes. We won’t be sharing our motorbikes with people that haven’t had experience because they might crash. I will die if we are not  allowed to ride motorbikes in the paddock.


Therefore, in summary I think we should be able to bring our motorbikes to school because they are fun and we will be safe.

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2 comments:

  1. Cool as story Hanita i reckon that is a good reson to bring motorbikes to school

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  2. Hanita you have some good points for bringing a motorbike to school. But you wouldn't be able to ride your motorbike in the paddocks because the paddocks don't belong to the school. Keep thinking of other fun things we could do at school.

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