This is my first presuasive write me and my group done

WALT identify what we did well and find ways we can improve our own persuasive writing. This will help us to write even better next time.

To be successful I will:

• Listen to my writing being read out.  Talk to a buddy about what we did well.
• Look at the success criteria. Talk to a buddy about what we need to improve on.

• Decide on your goals and write them down.

What I did well

I structured my writing well (Intro with a opinion, Main reasons with supporting detail, Summary,

I used some language features such as great Connectives, Hyperbole, Rhetorical questions

What I can do to try improve my persuasive writing

I want to try use more emotive and figurative language